Still not sure its an improvement over the clean factory look.
Your version kinda suggests a rally car look to me so I wonder if it fits the "theme".
Comes down to personal taste.
I am trying to do some tastful modifications that will make a Duster stand out, since I am smoothing and narrowing the bumpers (both) I decided to go a little farther and really make them unique....not really sure I had a theme going, if I do, it wasn't intensional. Besides the bumper will be so low to the ground most people wont even notice the lights. I did something similar on my Power Wagon and people thought I was trying to give it the Rally/off Road look but I just like that look, that was the one thing I always remember as a kid growing up really making an impression on the Shelby Mustang cars...so I guess it stuck in my head.