I was just feelin something
Sounds like a pretty good song to me. I wrote one similar to this a while ago, but it was a little more angry than yours. If you play an insturment, try putting it to music, that should help sooth your soul a little. Then try playing it for the significant person who it is inspired by. I do that sometimes with a song I wrote for the missus, and even after 5 years, she still gets the picture. Rock on Max, Geof